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In this issue I write down some suggestions on improving some lessons. They are ordered by lesson, not by importance or difficulty in implementing.
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more-04: you write "but if you use babel shortcuts they won’t be active there.". This is too advanced, and
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more-05: First mention of CTAN without having introduced it. Maybe explain in one sentence what it is.
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lesson-07: When introduction floats, you should also probably mention
\caption, as it is used in the example; also say that by usingfigureandcaption, figures are numbered. As the text is now, there is a gap with the material of lesson-09. -
more-07:
graphicspathnot clear (to me); you could mention that then you do not need the path in includegraphics -
more-09: After the comment at the end, a short mention that hyperref has options to make all this much better looking could be added, otherwise the reader could be discouraged to use it!
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lesson-10: The sentence "Note that all mathematics should be marked up as math, even if it is a single character use ...
$2$ ... not ... 2 ... otherwise, for example, when you need a negative number and need math to get a minus sign the ...$-2$ ... may use math digits which may not be the same font as the text digits (depending on the document class)." could be rephrased. At least a ":" should be added after "character". -
lesson-10: maybe also talk about
\frac(it is used in more-15); also possibly about basic math functions such as\int,\sin, ... -
lesson-11: "to prevent them from applying to the whole document" -> add "from that point on"
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lesson-11: In the exercise, the sizing command
\tinyis mentioned, maybe it should be added to the text. -
lesson-12: "You might also notice that in the article title, some entries are in an extra set of braces" -> "some elements are in an extra set of braces"
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more-12: The first section is almost repeating things already mentioned in lesson-12.
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lesson-13: In the section on
\include, maybe explain that each file produces its own .aux file. There has not been much explanation of .aux file, only in lesson 9 very briefly, and there it is mentioned as "auxiliary file", not ".aux file". -
lesson-13: "The
\appendixcommand changes the numbering " -> changes the chapter numbering -
lesson-14: Font selection: maybe say that pdflatex fonts are not in ttf/otf
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lesson-15: Maybe mention that all errors must be resolved; this is important for systems that continue processing without stopping at errors.
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more-15: Maybe move section about spurious errors to the main lesson; it is a standard workflow and source of problems.
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help: HTML output: the sentence "It may be specified at the same time as
xelatexorlualatexas well as the defaultpdflatexprocessing." is not clear. What does "It" refer to? Also, is "at the same time" accurate? I understand it as though I could write% !TeX make4ht lualatexand get both outputs. Finally, "xelatexorlualatexas well as the defaultpdflatex" would probably be better as "xelatexorlualatexor the defaultpdflatex". -
settings: For the "return" and "engine" settings, a technical jargon is used which might be inappropriate for the audience of the site. Also, it is different than the terminology used in the "Help" page. A more user-oriented description could be better.