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 "dateCreated": "2024-08-31",
 "datePublished": "2024-08-31",
-"dateModified": "2025-11-16",
+"dateModified": "2025-11-17",
 "description": "About the context of the Core Geometric System ™, the best-established and most accurate framework to calculate area and volume.",
 "disambiguatingDescription": "Introducing exact, empirically grounded and logically consistent formulas over the flawed conventional approximations.",
 "headline": "Introducing the Core Geometric System ™",
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 I calculated quite intensively and my calculations were quite extensive. When a backcheck resulted in an error I felt quite tired of it and just laid the figure face down.
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 About a month later I had a look at it and I realized at the first glimpse that the area of the circle equals the area of the square when the arcs of the quadrant circles intersect at the quarters of the centerlines.
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 Maybe that doesn't sound very scientific at first, but somehow I instantly realized that it is the only way.
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 That got me excited for obvious reasons, but also confused. Nobody thought of that before? Why is the π so different?
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-For a long time I just kept thinking and calculating all aspects of that, and I just shared my finding with a few friends. About a year later I concluded that they didn't share my excitement. 
+For about a year I just kept thinking and calculating all aspects of that, and I shared my discovery just with a few friends. They didn't share my excitement. 
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 Some of them didn't really care about math at all, those who did were sticking to the π, just because it's an old and highly hyped convention.
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-<p style="margin:12px;">I named my framework the Core Geometric System ™ and put the trademark symbol on it to indicate that this not just another geometric system, this is The Core Geometric System ™.
+<p style="margin:12px;">I named my framework the Core Geometric System ™ and put the trademark symbol on it to indicate that this not just another abstract geometric system, this is The Core Geometric System ™.
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 It reflects that my logic is built in accordance with the core principles of mathematics. That is something people assume of the conventional one and they have no idea how badly it deviated from that.
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 If you are familiar with basic math, just skip to the geometry content.
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-Either way, expanding on the content with Copilot is quite fun.
+Either way, expanding on the content with Copilot is fun.
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 The link to the homepage is at the bottom of this one.
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